My chaotic thoughts.....

I have gotten used to writing some unusual pieces of 'writing', if that's what you call it. After receiving an absolutely negative response to my 'poetry', I have decided to present to the world after lots of apprehension.

'Have you ever felt time freeze,
My thoughts and tears in the breeze?

Fear will never blossom in my face

and the world will be ripped apart
So will the pain in my heart'

You haven't left yet?!..That must be a first...Most people run away at the first line. (No ..honestly..and don't roll your eyes)

I don't know if such lines can be considered English, but if you even remotely do, please tell me..I'll churn more of such incomprehensible gibberish...